I never finished Mass Effect, but I did like the suits a lot. I like this one too. The stripes, the collar. I do feel however, like her arms are too short, especially her right. I like the perspective, but Think you should try placing her right elbow lower. You might also try making her neck just a little longer and taking a look at her collar. The size of her hands is great, however. How her left one suggests coming towards the viewer really adds to the powerful look of the image.