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DAO: Fan Comic Page 23 by rooster82 DAO: Fan Comic Page 23 by rooster82
EDIT: Switched "Mm" to "Mhm". Thankies!
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"Mm" as in yes, uh huh, ditto, etc. Not "Mmm" delicious. hehe. I dunno, is there a proper spelling for that?

Also... "My first victim, it would seem," is an in game line. ;)

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Introduction (5 pages):
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Story Arc 1:
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Page 23: viewing now
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Story Arc 2:
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(This is a story of my PC, Nara, the Dalish elf. Her adventures may or may not exactly follow the game's timeline and outcomes.)

Disclaimer:
Dragon Age: Origins and its characters belong to Bioware Corp. I'm just an obsessed fan creating comics to show my love for this game. This is purely just for fun.

Dragon Age: Origins and its characters © Bioware
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:iconpistachioinfernal:
PistachioInfernal Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
You really put such a bitter twist on the original conversation. Poor Zev.
You're words are sharp and pierce my heart. :rose:
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:icontirilan:
TIRILAN Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
When I read this I want to play DAO again *-* my Dalish elf was also in love with Zevran though it was a little complicated :D
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:iconxhydralisk:
Xhydralisk Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Heavy. Being told that your first victim was your own mother must not be very pleasant.
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:iconagentak:
agentAK Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011
I adore the last panel. It's just so heartbreaking.
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:iconjedipadme:
JediPadme Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2010
You have snookered me Lady. I am an Alistair fangirl, but I am hoping for a happy ending for my lovely Zev and his warden....

I can hear the voices during this converstaion. So beauitful, so poignant.

Brava!
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:iconvalhar2000:
Valhar2000 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2010
Isn't the in-game dialog "My first victim, as it were."?
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:iconkittanee:
Kittanee Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2010
Yes it is.
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:iconfallingangel89:
fallingangel89 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
love how you incorporated that in there, nicely done
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:iconhalowyn:
halowyn Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2010
awww more heartbreak! Poor Zev. So well written.
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:iconlordbloodysoul:
LordBloodySoul Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Poor Zev D: All with such tragedy in DA T_T
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:iconwildgreenie:
WildGreenie Featured By Owner May 5, 2010
love zev's expression in the last panel <3
you're very talented
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:iconsilksieve:
silksieve Featured By Owner May 3, 2010
I really like the way you've been using white to ink and outline. Also, now I'm imagining Nara teaching Zevran Elvish and Dalish traditions. :)
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:iconrooster82:
rooster82 Featured By Owner May 3, 2010   Digital Artist
Oh! Hehe... you beat me to it! Sorta something like that happens in the next page, which will be up soon. ;)
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:iconsilksieve:
silksieve Featured By Owner May 3, 2010
hee! I have a sudden urge to go buy lottery tickets now. XD
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:iconomegakittyextreme:
OmegaKittyExtreme Featured By Owner May 2, 2010
I love this comic...I havent finished playing with a Dalish yet...so I was a bit spoiled. But now I cant wait til it gets to the shriek tamlen point.

Zevran loves that sloppy bun doesnt he ^.^
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:iconscreaming-darkness:
Screaming-Darkness Featured By Owner May 2, 2010
This is... this is so... moving *snif* i love it! I will follow, thanks for making such a wonderful comic
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:iconeofte:
Eofte Featured By Owner May 2, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Aww~~ You're so sweet Zevran, changing the subject and all<3

"My first victim, it would seem" That's just one of the best Zev's lines in the whole game.

Ok, I've said this already once, but I can't kill you to hear it again: You catch their emotions so damn well^^
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:iconjonwassing:
jonwassing Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
mhm. i believe that is how it is spelled.
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:iconkcmalice:
KCMalice Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010
i love how you put in game tid bits just amazing

and i love his face in the last panel, makes him look even more needful of a hug :3
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:iconomnicientomelette:
OmnicientOmelette Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010
such SUCH love for this comic
OMFG your Zevran and Tamlen are SO hot
Grammar optional, amirite?
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:icondasilvab:
DaSilvaB Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010
oof! Just read through the whole comic so far and I love it! ^-^

Love your art style and how you run Zevs characterisation and the romance (confession: I freaked out the one time I ran through the love scene with my city elf warrior lady when he talked about how he could have poisoned you during it o.O .Dumped him for Leliana).
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:iconzarathepirate:
ZarathePirate Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010
:zips in:
I love your use of grayscale.
:flits away:
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:iconrooster82:
rooster82 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010   Digital Artist
Thanks! :zips out:
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:iconvaliaterrand:
ValiaTerrand Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010
I just have to pop in and say I -adore- the entire comic. It's really beautiful and you capture expressions so well!
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:iconrooster82:
rooster82 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010   Digital Artist
thanks very much. :)
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:iconchakhabit:
chakhabit Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010
oh man! zev's last line got me all heartbroken in the game :[
such a sad thing to say :[
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:iconrooster82:
rooster82 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010   Digital Artist
Yes. Poor fella.
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:iconatariel91:
Atariel91 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010  Student General Artist
LOVE the top main frame :) beautiful, the tears look so pretty. I know its kinda lame and not so 'art-pro-fessional' to say it's 'pretty' but it is the only word I can think of to describe it. haha. Can't wait for the next installment. :)
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:iconrooster82:
rooster82 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010   Digital Artist
Haha. I'm good with 'pretty'. :love: Thanks.
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:iconbloodrelic:
BloodRelic Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010  Student Digital Artist
aww, it's still makes me a little sad when Zev says that about his mom, the comic looks great btw hun :>
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:iconrooster82:
rooster82 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010   Digital Artist
thanks. :)

btw, your avatar makes me wanna dance.
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:iconbloodrelic:
BloodRelic Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010  Student Digital Artist
lol, I get that allot :) thankies
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:iconhaeron:
Haeron Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010
Very good work done :)
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:iconrooster82:
rooster82 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010   Digital Artist
thank you. :)
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:iconlillamamman:
LillaMamman Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
love it as always. :worship:

Exellent work with the emotions. You can really see how Zev wants to comfort Nara but don't know how or if he even should.

If you got time over, please read my fan fic about my GW. And if you do, please 'do say something dear'.
Have readers but no ones comments. :lonely:
I need to know if I should keep putting the story up.
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:iconrooster82:
rooster82 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010   Digital Artist
Thank you!

I'll be sure to check out your fanfic when I get a chance. :)
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:iconlillamamman:
LillaMamman Featured By Owner May 1, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I appreciate it. :hug:
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:iconinversereality-2:
InverseReality-2 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2010
What a lovely scene. :glomp:
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:iconrooster82:
rooster82 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010   Digital Artist
:hug:
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:iconvamporchid:
VampOrchid Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I must confess something, I never really cared for Zev until I started reading your comic. And now, when playing DA I look forward to him!
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:iconrooster82:
rooster82 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010   Digital Artist
hehe. Yay for Zev love! ;)
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:iconyumijanine:
yumijanine Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2010
gahHH!!! the emotions!! They're so AMAZING!! :iconicameplz:

Just so cute! I love the way they interact with each other.

WOMAN!! How DO YOU come up with this stuff?!!! You're so great!
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:iconrooster82:
rooster82 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010   Digital Artist
:blush::hug:
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:iconb6l6u6e:
B6L6U6E Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2010  Student General Artist
I'm always excited to see another page of this doujin. I love it. I also like Zevy's new hair style you gave him. XD
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:iconlittlecrazyneko411:
littlecrazyneko411 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2010
Awwww it's sort of sad and sweet at the same time. Looks like Zev is warming up to our warden <333333 God I love 'im ^///^ and I love how you added that game line! Perfect!
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:iconaiteamo:
aiteamo Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2010
I want to hug him~!!!!
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:iconphantomdragoness:
PhantomDragoness Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Awww, Zev! Don't blame yourself!

Oh, and I LOVE it when he goes "mmm?" when you want to talk to him. Makes me warm all over. :XD:
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:iconnithiril:
Nithiril Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Another wonderful page ! :)
Thank you.

*sigh* Zevran... ^^
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:iconalmightygamer:
AlmightyGamer Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I adore how you draw their hair, it's gorgeous :love:
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:iconkitanapaladine:
kitanapaladine Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2010
I love reading your comic, I check DA every day to see if you update.

This page is just as sweet at the previous few. So amazing!
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